Open Poetry #38 |
Omens |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
Hoot owl in the orchard, three nights in a row. Mama made a list of family and friends. Mantle clock stopped and Papas moving slow. Hogs are running scared of the red in the wind. Better brace yourself There's gonna be a sad time. An old crow flew in the window last night. Grannys been saying it sure is a bad sign. Mamas reading Psalms by the coal oil light. Papas dead tired from toting sugar and corn. Went to bed sick. Didn't have an appetite. Granny got her black veil. Ready to mourn. Redbone howled three times last night. Sisters in the kitchen with a chair on one leg. Spinning it around like she knows she shouldn't do. Brothers gone crazy from eating Mamas nutmeg. Broke Granny's mirror with an old horseshoe. The old hen took to crowin' Granny grabbed the hatchet. Doctor came in... Threw his hat on Daddy's bed. Mule got out the gate 'cause I forgot to latch it. Papas got a fever. Talking out his head. Uncle Frank slammed the door Knocked the salt off the shelf. The hound howled again So I looked between his ears. My knees got to shaking when I saw myself. I'd best be making plans to clear away from here. Give my love to Mary Dawson Give my love to Peggy Sue Give my love to Sally Carson Give my love to Linda Lou Give my gun to ol' Thad Evan Give my furs to Bobby Jones Let my soul go up to Heaven Let the mountain have my bones. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Uriah....this gave me the chills tonight, no kidding. I had a omenous dream last night/morning (rarely have those kind of dreams)....dreamed I was in the airforce flying over Iran, and I dare not say more. *shivers*.....jo |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is a hoot. Enjoyed. martyjo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
and all in a day's work huh? Life and it's roller coaster ride great write.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my..now this made me smile.. seeing all the old superstitions, a lot of them I had forgotten. Thanks for jogging my memory with this one. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved that last verse and line there Larry |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Enjoyed, Larry! |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Makes me think of my Grannie. Enjoyed Uriah! :-) |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
I enjoyed the old time feel of this, with papa and granny and Peggy Sue. |
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