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Open Poetry #38

Temptation

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2006-06-13 08:53 PM

Temptation resists
To tempt me some more
I’ve become too willing
No hesitation or doubt
I’ve become immune
To the feeling after
Kept myself distant
Distant from others
No longer do I feel
All that’s to come
The thrusting of a void
That could never be filled
But I still struggle
With or without temptation
Yanking my own arm
With no will to stop
Only the intention to start
So now you see why temptation resists
To tempt me some more
For I’ve become the temptress
Behind closed doors.

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2006-06-13 10:03 PM

Powerful!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Jess
Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 243
Washington

2 posted 2006-06-14 03:51 PM

ooh, i like it! Especially the ending. I cant think of a better way to beat temptation!

ChaoticHazeLight
Member

since 2006-06-13

Posts 71
California, U.S.

3 posted 2006-06-14 04:06 PM

You are your own lover? j/k hm... what're you really trying to say through this? We can be tempted to do alot of things.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

4 posted 2006-06-14 10:38 PM

I'm Not Writing About A Certain Temptation, Just Temptation in General, But If I Was Was Writing About A Certain Temptation, It Would Be....One Night Stands, I Guess.

-Trina

I Thought of You Today,
And What We Could've Had
For A Brief Moment I Had You
And Still, I Somehow Knew
I'd Have To Let Go

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