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Ericc
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0 posted 2006-06-13 06:51 PM

The wind blows warm
against me.

A summer storm nears.

In a less solid moment...perhaps I'd
join the breeze.

Moving swift across you...yielding to
your curves and points that offer
momentary rest before
departure.

Perhaps...In a less solid
moment.

© Copyright 2006 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2006-06-13 08:10 PM

perhaps you would

Magnus

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2 posted 2006-06-13 08:14 PM

smooth as silk! Nicely done Eric.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2006-06-13 09:12 PM

...perhaps, yes.

Love it Eric!
Hugs, Nancy

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

iliana
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4 posted 2006-06-14 12:10 PM

Bravo! Summer soft.......jo

LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-06-14 03:11 PM

beautiful

Margherita
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Eternity

6 posted 2006-06-18 10:53 AM

quote:
In a less solid moment...perhaps I'd
join the breeze.

Moving swift across you...

Perhaps you did ...

the breeze swept you off your feet

and the touch was breathtaking.

I love you.
Margherita

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2006-06-19 04:54 PM

Amazing write, Eric!

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