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Open Poetry #38

Rise To Honor

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-06-12 10:35 PM

Everything so clouded,
Brain hacked and crowded.
Falling so low into sleep,
Satan wishes he was me in the deep.
Rise to honor!
Fight back just for you to pull me down again,
Tear meat from the rind and laugh for sin.
And I have a dream,
Satan stands at full scream.
Rise to honor!
Everything ripped away,
Mind lead astray.
Still I hang onto a dream,
While Satan passes hellish cream.
Told to come to Honor,
But where's the honor in lies?
I HAVE A DREAM!
HANG ONTO THIS DREAM!
Rise to honor,
And Satan wishes he was me...

Hollow heroes seperate as they run...Shadows linger in your pain dead and done

Will Rhyme
Member

since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

1 posted 2006-06-12 11:13 PM

Cool!

"Rise to honor!"

And...why not?

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

2 posted 2006-06-13 12:07 PM

Really nice flow. A smooth read.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-06-14 12:07 PM

Greatly enjoyed.

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