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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Carousal By a sly creature of fate, torn from my life was my beloved. A huanting memory. Vast pain I suffer. Mischievous demond of catastrophe riding the carousal. On the wooden horse be gentle. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Heartbreaking ride, Frank. I enjoyed it. Welcome! |
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Raindancer New Member
since 2006-06-07
Posts 6Dancing in the rain |
this is sad, and heartfelt Welcome from me as well Rain If you ask me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Frank...Life sometimes is like a carousal, and most of them don't have that ring to reach for anymore. Lots of feeling in these few words of yours. Welcome to Passions! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions Frank! Please check your email for a special welcome greeting. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Frank~ Welcome to Passions~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Welcome to Passions Frank ! Enjoy yourself here.  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ride the painted ponies ever ending circle back to this... to this ride the painted ponies Nicely written Frank...welcome to our world |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
Welcome to Passions Frank! Let the carousel ride continue... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
A gentle catastrophe is quite the concept! Kind of like going round and round in the circle game. Welcome to the blue pages, Frank~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I felt such an aching sadness riding that carousel. Welcome to these poetry pages. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Frank. Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
W E L C O M E Good descriptive writing. Great first post. I can certainly understand how being on this sort of carousal ride that you've described here for so long can get you grief dizzy and I do hope that it stops spinning for you real soon. -Bob |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome...I hope you find the ride here at Pip to be enjoyable. I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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