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Ribbon Sound
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Ribbon Sound |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ribbon Sound An emissary, the sky offered white stepping-stones Submitting a pathway to lift my thoughts Hunger growled in my belly though I craved not Our spirits conversed at the magenta ridge Where light opened there, and threw fingers to the earth The songs were herald of the opening of day, tomorrow Promise still to be seen, if only to the interested few Token in the trailing flight of swallows, finishing then And moved me closer to the goodness of your heart Cupping the wandering winds of ending to begin again Our spirits float in the songs of ancient gathering Flower and fruit, an offering to nourish harmony My heart is full, in the ribbon sounds of nearness We have grown so close and come so far I tug the satin rope closed behind me, to see you For another first time Copyright Kkh 6/10/06 |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Our spirits conversed at the magenta ridge Where light opened there, and threw fingers to the earth" A most beautiful and amazing write Kathleen. My favourite lines above. Very much enjoyed the read. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint such beauty in your scenery.. always a pleasure to read, to decipher.. good morning my friend.. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Katleen~ 'Our spirits conversed at the magenta ridge Where light opened there, and threw fingers to the earth' You paint such word-beauty~ Thank you for being a poetess~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Frank W. Torres Member
since 2006-06-10
Posts 133 |
Very Nice. (Cupping the wandering winds of ending to begin again). Perhaps that line makes one think about the vast circle of life or love. Mayhap life and love go hand in hand? |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
Very beautiful TD! :-) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"My heart is full, in the ribbon sounds of nearness We have grown so close and come so far I tug the satin rope closed behind me, to see you For another first time" Whoa... Nicely painted portrait! Beautiful!! JL  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Excellent work TD. "to see you For another first time" Beautiful. |
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