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Raindancer
New Member

since 2006-06-07

Posts 6
Dancing in the rain

0 posted 2006-06-10 06:28 PM

I see you in dreams
the silver of my calm
the orange flowers spill
over dark vines
over the wall of time

while the ocean waves
shift and fold

reminding me; I am but an island
lonely without you

If you ask me
what I came to do in this world
I the artist will answer
I am here to live out loud

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-06-10 06:39 PM

This is so lovely...
Welcome to Passions.

Please check your email for a special greeting.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2006-06-10 07:18 PM

Raindancer....lush imagery and feeling...much enjoyed! Welcome to Passions!

StevenS
Senior Member

since 2005-09-21

Posts 945
L. A. (Lower Alabama)

3 posted 2006-06-10 08:44 PM

Welcome Raindancer, now your island is surrounded by a sea of blue pages where anything is possible. :-)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2006-06-10 08:55 PM

A truly beautiful write.
Welcome.
TD

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

5 posted 2006-06-10 11:21 PM

Powerful albeit short....islands must get so lonely out there by themselves....I don't think I could be one for long. (Though some days I wouldn't mind it!) Welcome to Passions!

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

6 posted 2006-06-11 12:20 PM

Frank W. Torres
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 133

7 posted 2006-06-11 01:40 AM

Raindancer, personaly I favor short verse that strikes a cord. Splendid piece. Write on! Your in the grove with that one.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2006-06-11 08:46 AM

Dance in the rain often;
your footprints
leave wonderful poetry.

Welcome to Passions!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

poettothecars
Senior Member

since 2006-02-10

Posts 1093
New Zealand

9 posted 2006-06-11 08:50 AM

a new face, a fresh smile and a new dance to learn, rather like singing in the rain, or just being poetic

welcome from me as well

a poet who cares

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2006-06-11 06:14 PM

welcome to Passions!

Raindancer
New Member

since 2006-06-07

Posts 6
Dancing in the rain

11 posted 2006-06-12 09:40 AM

thank you for the welcome : 0 )

If you ask me
what I came to do in this world
I the artist will answer
I am here to live out loud

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2006-06-12 11:00 AM

RainDancer~
WELCOME to the pages blue~

I enjoyed the imagery you presented with this penning~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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