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When I Awake
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When I Awake |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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When I awake I hear the waking of touché Within the breaking of the day And feel the scuttle waves of breeze Upon my skin in subtle tease It wakes my senses one by one Until aroused to greet the sun And when alert to here and by I greet the day in awe and sigh It starts within my heart and head A horseshoe heated fire red And placed upon an anvils face To bend within this flow of space This plenary of greenery Seen through windows scenery A palette full of Renoirs paint Enough to make a strong man faint And in this view of magic’s Vail Set the main mast and hoist my sail |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
You sir, the master of rhyme have done it again. This is perfect Sey!  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
What a wonderful read to start my day!  Hope you weekend is a peacefilled one Sy. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such wise thoughts from a man of many. You never bore us with your words. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
So? Where did that sail of yours take you yesterday? I am sitting here waiting for today's message m'friend.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to get my Sy-fix again after three days |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "It starts within my heart and head"...You have a way of starting the day that delights me!  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Dear Sy, Through your poetry you float my hope and rock my boat, blowing love in all directions. I look for you here, knowing I'll never be disappointed. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Fair weather Sailor Sy! It's another beauty you have written. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"I greet the day in awe and sigh" GRIN, cuz I greet the day with awe and Sy. |
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Troy Member
since 2006-06-04
Posts 52B.C. |
Impressive! and I mean impressive! There are 'POETS' still who obviousloy meet the job description. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Morning windows and such a smile! What treasure. ~ Klassy |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It starts within my heart and head A horseshoe heated fire red And placed upon an anvils face To bend within this flow of space the wealth of love is a marvelous thing, very powerful, as well as your poem... thank you Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To every one of my wonderful friends I love you all and send no end of thanks. |
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