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BugBuggy
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0 posted 2006-06-09 09:52 PM



I went today,
to see our place.
A warm breeze was coming,
acrosed the water.
The pines were,
swaying.
The earth stood,
still.
Once more,
we were there.
I could hear your,
laughter.
I could smell your,
cologne.
Your touch,
caressed me.
Together always.
Forever our camelot.

bugbuggy
5-2006

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2006-06-09 10:10 PM


Very lovely indeed.
Congrats on becoming a full Member.
Hugs~Nancy

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dancing with you in the summer rain ~

garysgirl
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2 posted 2006-06-09 10:31 PM


This is really a pretty poem. I enjoyed
reading it very much.
Hugs,
Ethel

BugBuggy
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3 posted 2006-06-09 10:39 PM


Thank you for the kind words you are both very sweet...

BugBuggy

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4 posted 2006-06-09 10:52 PM


Very nicely done.
Enjoyed this.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

The Lady
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5 posted 2006-06-09 10:56 PM



Your is a lovely Camelot reba.

BugBuggy
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6 posted 2006-06-11 02:54 PM


you all are so kind thank you all so much and yes Lady it was a beautiful camelot..I sometimes go there now to relive the joys and pleasures in my mind and heart...

BugBuggy

froggy
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7 posted 2006-07-15 01:21 AM


I could of swore I commented on this.
If not than I am now. :-)

This is indeed a beautiful read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Kristabell
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8 posted 2006-07-15 03:57 AM


Very nice, and it is such a good feeling, eh?

Kristabell

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9 posted 2006-07-15 12:29 PM


Reba~
Nice to read you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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aziza
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10 posted 2006-07-15 06:55 PM


This is lovely.
Thank you.

aziza

BugBuggy
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11 posted 2006-07-15 11:24 PM


thank you everyone who commented on this...camelot is a lovely place where love was shared and tears were shed.....thank you for allowing me to share a little of it with you

BugBuggy

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