Habits, Transmutations and Obstructing Superman's Vision (tanka)

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Open Poetry #38

Habits, Transmutations and Obstructing Superman's Vision (tanka)

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

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0 posted 2006-06-09 11:01 AM

       Never letting go
The burdened one journeys on
     With his sack of lead
  Wishing it would turn to gold
He could exchange for more lead

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-06-09 11:56 AM

WindWalker
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2 posted 2006-08-27 11:10 PM

I really like this one!!!!!!!!!!!

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-08-27 11:43 PM

and so it goes...
great write Uriah!

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24

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4 posted 2006-08-27 11:54 PM

I read this three times. It sounded like someone I knew, and then I realized the who and the why. Talk about looking in a mirror. Eye opening, to put it minimally. Very, very nice.

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