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Open Poetry #38

I am walking out the door

shirtless
Member

since 2006-04-29

Posts 359

0 posted 2006-06-07 06:31 PM

I am walking
out the door
and good-bye
is not even close
to the right word
if there is a word

please,
do not mistake
what I am doing
for leaving
the way you mistook
my presence
after my never having been there
for arriving

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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

1 posted 2006-06-07 08:02 PM

Your writing packs a powerful punch as usual....

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2006-06-08 09:13 AM

Another fine read.

:-)

Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things,
man will not himself find peace."

Albert Schweitzer,
Nobel Peace Prize Wi

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2006-06-08 09:36 AM

Obscure truths and mind mutterings... *grin*

I love them.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

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