I caught my bed with another's man's Wife

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Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22

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0 posted 2006-06-07 03:30 AM

I caught my bed with another's man's wife
and....it hurt me to the core.
The sheets took on another life;
My pillows now are sore.

And...

every night, my bedsprings pray...
they want an encore!!!
Now, I'll have to marry, or,
nail them to the floor.

Klassy Lassy
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since 2005-06-28

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1 posted 2006-06-07 11:44 AM

bedsprings talk too much... I'm thinking memory foam might be even worse...

What a twist!

~ Klassy

Jess
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2 posted 2006-06-07 07:19 PM

personally, im in favor of an encore!

Magnus

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3 posted 2006-06-07 07:46 PM

Loved it...made me laugh and having trouble
getting this grin off my face....

shirtless
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4 posted 2006-06-07 08:48 PM

I had to share this with other people in my house. Thanks for the entertainment.

Will Rhyme
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5 posted 2006-06-07 11:15 PM

Many thanks to each and everyone.

Will

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2006-06-08 07:35 AM

Ohh! The secrets bedsprings could tell!

Cute poem!

EA

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7 posted 2006-06-08 09:14 AM

Funny! I love wit in poetry, and it's one of the hardest things to do right. And this? Perfect!

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froggy
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8 posted 2006-06-08 09:23 AM

I love it.

:-)

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man will not himself find peace."

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Will Rhyme
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9 posted 2006-06-08 03:26 PM

And, once again, thanks to all.

Will

Martie

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10 posted 2006-06-08 03:34 PM

Will

The title itself...the whole poem, smiling!

bivzbabe
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11 posted 2006-06-08 04:58 PM

i Believe I have found the one with whom I shall never experience such pain. I do not care to experience jail, but feel I would if ever I should encounter this situation. I thank God I never have! ~Sherry

Goldenrose
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12 posted 2006-06-08 08:05 PM

Very funny write here will thank yiou..

Goldenrose.

Will Rhyme
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13 posted 2006-06-08 11:28 PM

Thank You Martie!

Will

BugBuggy
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14 posted 2006-06-09 09:38 PM

that was great funny and wonderful to read and i know i am lucky my bed springs can't talk LOL give us another one soon

BugBuggy

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15 posted 2006-06-09 10:12 PM

Too funny!!!

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PhaerieChild
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16 posted 2006-06-09 10:13 PM

Darn those noisy bed springs...never could stay quiet! How funny!! Loved it!

garysgirl

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17 posted 2006-06-09 10:19 PM

This is cute. Didn't know what I was going
to find when I opened it up. LOL

Thanks for looking for your hat when you replied
to my poem. LOL.
Hugs,
Ethel

The Lady
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18 posted 2006-06-09 10:58 PM

Oh yeah! Now that's funny! Love it.

Will Rhyme
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19 posted 2006-06-09 11:47 PM

Never tought this "thing" would have generated so much attention.

But, of course, my writer's ego likes it.

Thanks again...to all!

and Ethel, I always seem to be looking for my hat.

Now,

By chanch, have you seen it?

can't keep up with the darned thing....

Will

edwardslos
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20 posted 2006-06-13 12:39 PM

Will,you should be more careful-heheheee. I love the poem

Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22

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21 posted 2006-06-13 02:52 AM

wasn't me Ed, t'was the bed!

I said....

Thanks for the post,
Will

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