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murky waters |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Murky waters overflowing bulging my ships seams with clouded thoughts floating. Float some...jettison some, and what remains is a cold embrace too distant to feel the warm too close to not feel burnt hearts churned in seething foam while away underneath azured skies flies a heartbeat seeking a distant star as the steel highways steal time, capture miles of rhyme ‘neath rubber treads, souls waiting enrapture within heartbeat threads. Murky waters find me in fitful sleep within the arms of the keeper of the deep oh, powerful Neptune, why didn’t you drown me long before I craved yonder shore? Now silent clouded thoughts lie awaiting the lift of the anchor. And none of this makes sense anymore. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
Be still my heart! Absolutely beautiful. Great poem |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The murky waters of the deep dare not drown you, for if your life were to be claimed, Neptune would be in hot water with a multitude of your fans!  Linda  |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well now, if that was not one of your best yet. Lovely the work you are doing Kacy. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Murky waters....that's a perfect description for the kind of mood conveyed here. Hang in there, Karcy. ....jo |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kacy~ 'silent clouded thoughts lie awaiting the lift of the anchor' Oh yes ... this is good~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
How thoughts are tossed around on the waves of emotion and life..thank you for this.. Goldenrose. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I almost didn't post this, thinking it might be a bit too murky in tone and hard to fathom. thanks for reading and commenting, Actually, it's a 'lighthearted' version of the original write, whcih was pure mud and muck.  |
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