Open Poetry #38 |
Kismet |
Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Kismet or kiss or hiss me in emotion that transcends initial shallow picturasche gone images that were once words that travelled with nothing but image between consenting beings traversing beyond boundaries that smiled |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the imagery |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Midnight Dave |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow - this is a unique stance to the idea of 'kismet' - soulmates.....The imagery and tone is fabulous, this is one of your best Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
A beautiful poem for one of my favourite words! Love this Dave! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree, an excellent write. JL |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
traversing beyond boundaries that smiled.. Sometimes crossing the line is just too enticing! Lovely poem, Dave! ~K |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
A beautiful piece and a keeper as they always are. :-) Until he extends the circle of his compassion to all living things, |
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