Open Poetry #38 |
amber's bay (some pm thirty) |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sweet succedaneum shivering your promises like the vibrations of a someday from the lips of another woman's god taxi of checkered sundowns reflecting in your midnight yellows as the dimes over oarsmen's eyes helming their soup slurp wood in wet you hear the leather of me as I breath humble air from the galloping clouds and speak spitless to your earth I know your smile as you yawn and tiptoe fingernails on the aching of your ends begging for teeth and ice to bite the lovely of your sweating summer windows ________________ daark |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome home... |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Damn - you've got some amazing imagery.....I love this and am saving it Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS "you hear the leather of me as I breath humble air from the galloping clouds" It is so good to read your amazing poetry again...I've missed you! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you hear the leather of me as I breath humble air from the galloping clouds and speak spitless to your earth I enjoyed this especially and like Martie am glad to read your traveling words. M |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Something so surreal about this poem, but the teeth and ice definitely set the depths of hollows on edge. Heightened surreality with the feel of other dimension palms my imagination skyward on the imagery. Lovely, Darrk! Welcome back... Hugs, Klassy |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I know your smile as you yawn and tiptoe fingernails on the aching of your ends begging for teeth and ice to bit" Oh Stranger. THIS is what I've been missing. |
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