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Correlations |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Correlations When we connect ‘twas my suspect though seam of dream cuts quick to clean though shadows remain ‘tis then some dissect that inward keen and reflect ahh, it is then …we smile. Auroras ripple pinpoints stipple this inward voice calls quick choice silent words is silence speaking all while poets come a’tweaking and it is quiet …this smile. Shivers ember a moment’s tender in this reflection our connection is silvered mirror to see thus, clearer and then, this hope a lifeline’s rope tender this …our smile. Embers fused we refused to let it go thus, we know yellows come red blues come green then the mixes in between life is thus …a smile. Let your fires burn Correlations " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
as always 'tis time well spent reading rays of sunshine |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And truly....there are only correlations....they're everything. Some good, some not so, some appalling....wanted or not it's correlations within correlatons, within correlations....electrons, protons, neutrons....quarks..... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Karilea, I am trying not to WIHWTL ('cause envy's a sin, right?!)..."and then, this hope, a lifeline’s rope." *hugs*......jo |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"life is thus …a smile." Masterful Kairlea. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie "life is thus …a smile. Let your fires burn Correlations" You tie life and light together so beautifully...I learn from you!  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Kairlea, Well, I could certainly relate to... quote: ...and having this phrase now stuck in my mind, I do think that you've done some mighty fine tweaking here. I have enjoyed reading your poetry again. God bless. -Bob |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
So true! Believe it or not, I am trying to smile. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Embers fused we refused to let it go thus, we know yellows come red blues come green then the mixes in between life is thus …a smile. Let your fires burn Correlations" Some relationships more than others. This speaks volumes. A beauty!! JL  |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
after a long hard day of work...reading this piece put the first smile on my face today. wonderfully woven. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A finely crafted poem here Karilea..thank you..enjoyed the read. Goldenrose. |
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Jess Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 243Washington |
you keep the fires burning |
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