Open Poetry #38 |
Fernandina Beach |
Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
You know I’ll walk the beach with you anytime, right? It’s been a few years and I never grow tired of the stories or the gossip that we inspire. Let them think what they will We are good together In the way we are together They’ll never understand. But to me these years have been So much fuller Having someone to turn to Someone that can talk when I need to be Silent So put on your wings and fly I await your decent into my world, into myself and all over you. Let them make what they will of that. _____________________________________ Written prior to. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Having someone to turn to Someone that can talk when I need to be Silent" Well, no one's ever accused me of not having something to say. Guess that makes me perfect for the task, huh? Ditto Myrtle, anytime, anywhere... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
Some say friend Some say fiend Some say lover without guts Ridiculed by fiends or friends or both I relate to your words But nowadays every friend seems to be just someone waiting for a pay check to a tabloid Nice words Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my kinda friend let gossip fly where it will it is words without heart |
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shades of paul Member
since 2005-12-14
Posts 370In Reality |
A very good one Susan.................paul shades of peace,love,and happiness to you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, this one hits home. Really nice...and gave me a grin, too. *hugs*...jo |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
smiling at ya Susan, nicely done. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Now, Susan, I think you looked inside mine and Gary's heads on this one!! People have gossipped and made up stories about us the whole time we have gone together....December will be 9 years!!! LOL So, I don't reckon we let the gossip bother us too much. ahahahahaha!! Loved this, Lady. Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this gave me the biggest smile... noteworthy write, blessings to a man who is blessed by your love... |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
I read your words again Susan You write so powerfully and so deeply that I certainly confess to not giving your words due respect at times and doing the shallow cursory stuff You are, as I have often felt, quality in your words and should be published Dave |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
there is always truth in your words.... And so it those we live with |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Haven't had a chance to thank everyone properly... Thank you for the very nice responses. And Dunc? I had the best time, as you know..thank you for taking the time and finally cooking for me! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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