Open Poetry #38 |
goodbye.. |
linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
guess who's back here again picking myself off the floor.. writing in cliches think i've been here before.. they say we learn from mistakes grow strong from our tears.. but im falling again those crys fell on deaf ears.. now i stand here alone trying to hold my head high.. while you walk off with a smile without as much as a goodbye.. |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
This is very nice all though it was so sad it had beautiful flow. I really like it Debo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I enjoyed this poem and how you described the univeral feeling of sorrow after a negative action happens in anybody's life. Oh and the flow was great too.. :[ |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ouch yes ...I know that kind of hurt , I know someone that has been silent for months and never said goodbye Hope |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Sneaker waves...mini tsunamis of the heart. |
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