Open Poetry #38 |
Succulent Feast |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Succulent Feast Under the night light Spins the spider oh her web Silken threads greedy ~*~ Any Friday will do when sharing a meal with good friends They, the givers of a fragrant yellow rose from Texans Making night sounds ripple warm by laughter Quietly sharing burdens that shiver our timbers Allowing the lean on me to take hold Knowing trivial from emotional, consequential pain [No, we all did what we could…] Did we tell you, we look forward to these moments? Let alone the ones yet to come? ~*~ Silken threads greedy Spins the spider oh her web Under the night light One bug pounces another Morning hides the evidence " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A succulent feast to read, as well! The roses in Ohio are beautiful this year. I bet the Texan yellow are gorgeous. misce |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie...The give and take of the treasure of friendship makes an evening like this wonderful, to experience and read! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Succulent Feast” of your words fills the emptiness of time and space. “Quietly sharing burdens that shiver our timbers” An artist you are, indeed! ------------------------- “Under the night light One bug pounces another Morning hides the evidence” Now I’m going to go buy a night light so I can witness this event… JL |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well done Sun...and my wife (A Texan) has a yellow rose as her favorite flower. I shant never forget for fear of bodily harm.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine A very introspective write, enjoyed the read. squeeze: |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow! This is fantastic, Sunshine. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
the glare of bright morning light covers much of the magic that lies wrapped tight in the arms of midnight hello lady sunshine |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
interesting.... nice use of words...liked it.. you are very talented i hope to read more from you |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
"Silken threads greedy Spins the spider oh her web Under the night light One bug pounces another Morning hides the evidence" wow... WOW!!! |
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