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Widow's Peak
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Loose ends he caresses between his fingers Reflective eyes his prism smile Hand turning to test the forehead Withtaking beads from her brow. He is always there Absorbing The heat, the pain Whispering Whispering gently Whispering her name. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The "oh" under your name expresses my regard for this  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The oh under my name? Ah, I get it--OHio! Cute reply. Glad you like the poem! cathy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Cathy I can see this scene and almost feel the touch.  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Martie, It's a nice feeling isn't it? Glad to hear from you again. I hope you're mending nicely. hugs, cathy |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This has such mystique to it...very fascinating. Thanx! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful I enjoyed this |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Beautiful snapshot of an intimate moment, C. bunches of hugs.....jo |
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Ella Blue Junior Member
since 2006-05-26
Posts 47 |
I so love this, and it could be a father's hands, a husband's, or God's for those that believe. Thank you, this is well shown and I enjoyed reading. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
There's a comforting feel to this poem. I enjoyed it. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
this is great - loved reading it and feeling it - Paul |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
makes me want to have a fever just to feel such a hand caress, taking the heat away so tenderly |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Magnus, Mystique? Hm... I like that. I wondered if it would be after I entitled it as I did. I had a difficult time choosing a title. For me, that is the hardest part about writing! Thanks for dropping by. misce passing shadows, Glad you enjoyed it. It is great to see you posting again. Soon I'll have a little more time on my hands, I'm hoping, so I can reply to others. Thanks for taking the time to read... misce iliana, It's good to be able to write of such. Glad you enjoyed. misce Ella Blue, How perceptive of you. I hadn't thought of all the possibilities. Thanks for sharing your insight. misce |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
The Lady, If there is a comforting feeling to this poem, I accredit it those in our lives who have had that special touch. Unconditional love. Glad you liked it. misce Goodknight, You are the kindest! Thanks, Paul. misce Midnitesun, I don't have a fever this time, but I don't want to wish broken bones, gall bladder attacks, or broken heart upon you! I am thankful for such people who stick by us in times of, well, whatever. Just thought I'd write just a little of it; it seems I write it better than show it... Thanks for reading my thoughts. I really appreciate your thoughtfulness. misce |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
And it is possible, just possible...to be touched in such a way. When she is, when he is...or when theydo....it is a blessing. To know you're loved, even through the long years when life has decreed you will be apart for a while....yes, a blessing. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Ratleader, You understand exactly; picked up on the title I guess, or maybe you just know me too well... We can never appreciate one too much, can we? Thanks for your reflective response, Ed. And it is possible, just possible...to be touched in such a way. When she is, when he is...or when theydo....it is a blessing. To know you're loved, even through the long years when life has decreed you will be apart for a while....yes, a blessing. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
shirtless, Compassionate... I like that! Thank you for taking time to read and respond. misce |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You write real ~ and you can really write! To love, loving, and being loved in return, Linda  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Reading this and then reading the comments... absolutely beautiful. *S* |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Earth Angel, A very nice thing to say! Real is the only thing I know; I'd sure like to tap into some imagination sometimes. Do you have a recipe I can borrow? It is so good to hear from you. I hope you and mending well... hugs, misce Vandana, and it is good to be read; thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! Again, thanks~ misce suthern, Thank goodness to see your name again. Admittedly, I haven't been on the internet as much as I used to be, but when I am, I always look for your poetry, regardless of whether I am able to post against it. I miss ya, Southern lady! misce |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
A beautiful and tender touch miscellanea. :-) |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Steven, Thank you. It is nice to be able to write of something like this. So often I am taken by the wind and write of challenges, rather than appreciation! Thought it might be nice to turn it around; Glad you like it. miscellanea |
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