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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-06-03 08:52 AM

He Wrote Me

he wrote me
I guess it was
an easy thing to do
I read and reread the words
and it tugged at my heart
that was thinner than
the paper it was written on
and there it was
for me to keep
for a lifetime
to refer back to
in case I forgot
it was simple
and it was the truth
a five word sentence

“I just don’t love you”

just some words cut from
the diary of my heart

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2006-06-03 09:33 AM

awww Helen...I'm here if you need me

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2006-06-03 09:44 AM

Beautifully written Helen.
Hugs,
TD

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2006-06-03 02:28 PM

*wince*

painful one lovie

*touching the screen*

(and I haven't forgotten to "write you"--I just can't seem to do you justice

)

Debo
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since 2006-04-18

Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.

4 posted 2006-06-03 11:22 PM

The Truth hurts some times
And when it happened to me I had to read it many time to finally believe.
Great write Slick-Lady

Debo

Devious Intellectual
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since 2006-05-08

Posts 112

5 posted 2006-06-03 11:39 PM

wow..didnt think it would have an ending like that..short simple to the point..but very nice...

playing.with.crayons
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since 2006-01-02

Posts 362
Neverland

6 posted 2006-06-04 03:03 AM

this poem hits it right where it hurts the most...
what an aching read. but in a good way.
loved it.

Neeraja
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since 2002-06-22

Posts 812
The Netherlands

7 posted 2006-06-04 04:31 AM

Sad... sad words....

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

8 posted 2006-06-04 12:28 PM

How can one short phrase hit so hard?

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2006-06-04 02:34 PM

Ouch that hurts !!! I have only had silence not had one of those letters yet , but I am expecting it

Hope

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

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woven by a poet's loom

10 posted 2006-06-04 02:40 PM

Hearts that become brittle . . .

Ratleader

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2006-06-06 09:42 PM

The truest irony is, when a man writes such words, it's almost a certainty that he does....but because of some wall within himself, can't.

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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

12 posted 2006-06-06 09:44 PM

Awwww, this is so sad, but beautifully written. Sending you big hugs.

Will Rhyme
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since 2006-05-22

Posts 149

13 posted 2006-06-07 12:50 PM

"He wrote Yoy"

Well, what did HE say?

Will

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