Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
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2006-06-03
06:09 AM
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It could almost be summer except for the night when breath exists cold from the fires of soul that once sparked within the flames of desire and danced with the beauty of feminine needs.
It could almost be right except for the wrong that blankets the heart with the weight of a lie and almost, almost, the sweetness of song instead of the silence of acquiescence.
It could almost be an undressing of truth, an almost renewal of spiritual vows, and almost, almost, the undeniable proof that passion can’t die like old winter fires.
It could almost be the maker of peace and the almost complete reason for being and almost, almost, close enough, see, to pass me unscathed into the afterlife.
It could almost be a lifestyle of choice and an almost, almost, everyday love if not for the echo and constant re-voice of the almost, so almost, you and me!
Helen / 3 June 2006
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Helen
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2006-06-03
07:14 AM
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I do like this one
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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
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2006-06-03
11:10 AM
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Thanks very much, Dixie. Glad you enjoyed!
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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
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2006-06-04
10:01 AM
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It's hard living the "almost"...
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Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2006-06-04
11:05 AM
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"Almost" ~ but no cigar! A painfully frustrating place to be ~ and you wrote about it, so convincingly!
Giving you a big, loving hug,
Linda
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Debo
Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321
Texas U.S.A.
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2006-06-04
06:30 PM
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You sure have a way with almost getting there but never quite succeeding. I really like that in your work. It sure makes For suspenseful reading.Debo
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