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pmul76 New Member
since 2006-06-02
Posts 8 |
Hi im new here and this is my first post tell me what you thinkof this poem. This poem is just freestyle since I dont know that much about poetry. Through the pane I can see this night time scene How will it unfold Will it be like my poetry and remain untold Will I ever grow bold Or will this continue to drive me insane This pane shows me the moon rise My sun sets and as I remain in the darkness of my thoughts I grasp at my elusive thoughts of you My thoughts piece together the clues we left each other When we meet we will feel as if we are on another plane This pain shows me everything and nothing We’ll feel each other but never touch I’ll visualize you but never see you My past is your future and this illusion of you is my present We will suffer this pleasure until one day you become real |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I sense potential...  Welcome to Passions! Sit back, read, enjoy, learn... share. And please, check your email for a very Special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. Interesting first post. Write on. TD |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
welcome to the blue pages... I echo the above adding, brilliant, I loved this... will look for more of you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Welcome to Passions! I am looking forward to reading more! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to PiP~ Let the free-style flow ... all thoughts are poetic~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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