Open Poetry #38 |
Heidi's Song |
Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Blithely, she paused on lithe limbs and bare feet, her tresses flowing and fair, gathered her skirt with delicate hands, danced o'er the descending stair. Suddenly, like a small bird takes to wing in soft fluttering flight, she skimmed the ground with barely a sound, aglow in the afternoon light. Ephemeral and brilliant as evening sun, she quickly passed from view, an evanescent wraith on the breeze, a melody lilting in blue. ~Klassy Lassy ~ October 10, 1993 |
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StevenS Senior Member
since 2005-09-21
Posts 945L. A. (Lower Alabama) |
A pretty picture Klassy! :-) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very lovely indeed! Hugs~Nancy ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Klassy Lassy A klassy special, enjoyed. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful! I am so glad I saw her just in time, just before she disappeared. Thanks for the moment. - Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I am so pleased that you dusted this beauty off and brought it to the light of day for us all to enjoy! Whimsical, magical, and totally delightful! Warm loving hug and a knowing smile EA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Such a lovely picture you paint with words, of her. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you and hugs to you all for coming by to read. Heidi seemed mystical flying across campus. She was petite with white-blonde hair that hung in waves to her hips, and she wore long full flowing skirts in vivid colors with peasant blouses. She really was a vision! I'm pleased you enjoyed the pretty picture, too. [This message has been edited by Klassy Lassy (06-02-2006 06:37 PM).] |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Worthy of a poet's afternoon pursuit. Reminds me of something by W.B.Yeats. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I much enjoyed this. Reminds me of Shirley Temple, of course, and looking at a little delft blue creamer my Mom has with her picture on it. *hugs*....jo |
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Walter_Mitty_Esq Junior Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 21 |
Reminds me of John Keats, actually! :p |
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Walter_Mitty_Esq Junior Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 21 |
Reminds of John Keats, actually! :p |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KlassyLassyLady~ I adore this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Robert Edward Levin Junior Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 45can't remember. somewhere in midwest |
great flow to your words. R~ |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is lovely....so light and carefree.... ~sky I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying.... |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Iliana, I remember a blue delft creamer, too. Maybe my grandmother had one. My mom always loved Shirley Temple, but I didn't know who she was until I was older. She was such a doll! Walter, I am a little archaic in my style, but I was enchanted with some of the old poets. I should reat Keats again. Marge, a pleasure to make you smile, Dear Heart! I'm happy you enjoyed this vignette. Robert, thank you, too, for taking time to read this. Thinking of Heidi, 'flow' is a wonderful word. Skyshine: |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Arthur, that was a lovely thing to say. Thank you! |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Klassy, When looking for an old poem of mine, I was pulled in by your title. Exquisite writing! This needs to go back to the top and to my library! A wonderful scene you paint! misce |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Misce, You are a doll! thank you for the kind words. I can't keep up with all the terrific poets lately, and am looking forward to visiting your pages. Have a blue sky day! ~Klassy |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wow, I almost missed this one! I love the way the words float the image of Heidi. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Thank you for stopping to read. It's a delight to float you something you like! ~ Klassy |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Dainty, delicate, exquisite. |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL....yes, she is! And sings like an angel... Thank you, lady. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, being a Swiss I immediately thought of our Swiss Heidi, the famous tale written by Johanna Spyri and you know what ... your wonderful words describe a kind of magic that fits this little girl of the Alps too! Her song is "Jodel" though! Love the ethereal lightness of your poem. Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Margherita, I alway adored the story of your Swiss Heidi. I didn't know her song, though. Perhaps this Heidi could be Swiss, too. I have no idea.... Thank you for sharing with me. love, Karen |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! you sure have been writing for a long time! I love this poem! |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Hi, dear Dixie! I have been playing with rhymes since childhood, and I began to write in earnest about the time this poem came to me. I don't write as often as I'd like as my muse is slow, but some of the poems are just gifts of the spirit--like this one. I am a bit envious of those who write every day. I am so glad you write your heart into your poetry and share, too. Hugs, Karen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Beautiful choice of words and images... Ben |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Nice of you to drop by, Ben. Thank you! |
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