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A Point of View
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A Point of View |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
A Point of View I don't care what smoother roads I've traveled I would take a lesser one with you. Though the route be muddy, rough or graveled we would share a lovely point of view. ~but you are so very far away~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SArthurGrey~ I SO understand this one~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Love this! - Owl |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Simple and direct, isn't it?Nice one |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Awww! Simply eloquent... ~ Klassy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and sweet, with so much said |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
Hello! I'm giggling...it may be cosmic; a beautiful capsule. "lesser"? was sticking, as your word-play is au-naturale..."harder"? Although is there is a lesser in nature...? You got me pondering on that one. Rhythmically, a perfect fit. I'm feeling it. |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
I loved this piece because you got to the point quickly and along the way got across a charming yet warm and fuzzy feeling inside me.   ~Jill |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Yep...that's the way to go..enjoyed! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I liked the loving shivers this gave me, Sir... thank you |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh I love this.....I would travel this road too  Melissa~ Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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linkin16 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 26Wales,UK |
so much in four small lines..just the im feeling at the moment..thanks |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Marge - I trust you are on that road. Owl - Glad you liked. ecrivan - It seems so, if only it were so easy. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Klassy - Eloquent? Wow! James - Thank you. Dixie - Thanks. And maybe with a little sour between the lines. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
kif kif - Oh, I like someone who can find "sticky things" and giggle at the same time. I won't explain too much here, lest I trump the next reader. Jill - Glad you liked it, more ways than one. Martie - Good to see you here. Thanks. |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Sunshine - Smiling at your shivers. Melissa - Seems the better road, eh? linkin16 - Many can relate, I think. |
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Debo Member
since 2006-04-18
Posts 321Texas U.S.A. |
Now this is just great. And thats my point of view... Debo |
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