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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-05-31 09:03 PM


Heaven Knows


I had to say
goodbye to you.

Heaven knows I
never wanted to

but you left
me alone,
cut off your phone

put me in a position
of no hope & futility.

Not even a woman
that I love
can do that
to me.


JamesLee
May15
2006
I was mad
when I wrote
this.



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-05-31 10:26 PM


yep I feel the anger here

hopefully it has passed now

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2 posted 2006-05-31 10:28 PM


Nice Read JM.
aziza
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3 posted 2006-07-18 07:22 PM


I feel your anger in this poem, and also a sense of sadness.  It's good.

aziza

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4 posted 2006-07-18 07:44 PM


It is easy to sense your anger in this piece James.
How about a hug?
Nancy.

For it was not into my ear you whispered
But into my heart..
It was not my lips you kissed
But my soul.

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