Life, So Wonderful (tanka)

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Open Poetry #38

Life, So Wonderful (tanka)

XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11

Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2006-05-30 07:42 PM

"Life", so wonderful
  Imagined duality
  Waxing and waning
Having the experience
  Of an "experiencer"

skyshine

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since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2006-05-31 12:17 PM

I liked this....made me think too, which is hard to do (at least I think so) in a short format.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

Liz Sinclair
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since 2006-05-06

Posts 93
Atlantis

2 posted 2006-05-31 05:43 PM

I loved it because I'm definitely an experiencer. I've never tried one of these types of poems. Interesting...thanks for sharing. Take care, Liz...Carpe Diem

Bodger
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since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

3 posted 2006-05-31 05:54 PM

In my father's time

We had one religion

When you have nothing but you have "cobbler's Awls"

No money comes through

Master lives it all

End of storey

Dave

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