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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-05-21 09:01 AM

A Sunday Looking Forward

Forward looking always
to moments of each when.
Even though the nighttime tales
bring musings of us then.

The wishes simple, still unmet
beyond existing words,
clouded in the owing of
the voice in darkness heard.

Thoughts that mark me as I plan
and fragment piece each day,
abandoning my head to heart
though wounded by delay.

Tomorrow sometimes never comes
to be today in wait.
But bounded by a timeless love,
in dreams, I'll recreate.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-05-21 09:11 AM

Oh, this longing is so deeply felt, dear Maureen. But the "timeless love" is a precious gift. What your heart feels, exists.

Beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2006-05-21 05:11 PM

a wonderful Sunday write M

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2006-05-21 05:19 PM

Awesome M. the flow and rhyme are perfect.
I envy you, you make it so easy.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2006-05-21 06:41 PM

Margherita, thank you...timeless love is a precious thing.

Dixie, just trying to pass the time...

Barry, guess it's working with children most of my life ( and having 40 nieces and nephews)that makes rhyming easier for me.

M

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2006-05-21 06:51 PM

Hugging you for this one...

and yes, a new Sunday looking forward
[to tomorrow]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2006-05-21 07:29 PM

Have a great day tomorrow, Karilea...I will be thinking of you

M

Bodger
Senior Member

since 2005-06-12

Posts 1260
Tolerance for a short time

7 posted 2006-05-21 07:59 PM

I hope you tomorrow's come for you

Dave

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2006-05-21 08:00 PM

Thank you, Dave

M

picturegramic
Member

since 2006-05-16

Posts 112

9 posted 2006-05-21 11:23 PM

Great flow, loving thoughts, timeless!
thanks for sharing,

picturegramic :)

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