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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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No Root There is no root or absolute Nor can I find a substitute Though the argosy is not done I still can’t pass the number one I’ve learned to simplify the load But even though, can’t break the code I wonder in a circles bend And still I cannot find the end Perhaps beginnings are the root And we like flowers are the fruit Perhaps each ending of its dwell Is the water in the well? I hear the piper of the flute And see the dancers in pursuit My heart stays with the drummers beat And cannot stop my dancing feet So off I dance into the blue And wait my turn the final coup |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Perhaps beginnings are the root And we like flowers are the fruit Perhaps each ending of its dwell Is the water in the well? love that verse...  M |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
News Flash.... Your final coup is a long ways away as of yet....so, dance away! |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
You blossomed beautifully and you dance gracefully. Bloom on. Dance on. Dance in the wind. Until you stumble over the root and fall into the well. Then... Drink deep. blah blah blah LOL I loved this, Sir Sy. Thank you ::bows:: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you always have a way of a humbling lesson within your words, kindly served up in a happy meal...lovely Sir Sy |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a very delightful poem. May I join you in that dance? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you sweety. Magnus I'm dancing. LOL Uriah, Enjoyed your reply, thank you my riend. LeeJ, You mean without relish. LOL SmartChick, Why of course my dear.  |
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BROTHER JOHN Member
since 2006-04-06
Posts 386 |
Dear Seymour, Your style of writing I analyze. In each line you dance to eight beats. (Most of the time) Eight is the number of new beginnings. Your heart doth give you away as you sway to that new order that is near but unseen! Dance on with its music for you are in tune. |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
You speak for a lot of us Seymour Dave |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
BROTHER JOHN Thank you my riend. Bodger That is good to read. |
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