Open Poetry #38 |
Just Words |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Just Words Had a wonderful day thinking of you and all of the things we use to do. I timed it just right hoping to hear a deepened voice in whisper near. But it was fine, I enjoyed the day with thoughts of then and yester play. Common place, it has become to dream of when till I succumb To end my nights alone in thought, wondering still what words have wrought. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Bodger Senior Member
since 2005-06-12
Posts 1260Tolerance for a short time |
M From my poor mis real ab Have you contacted the Italiens Abut the bnanquettttttt And the drink9ing We need to be nerdly ready Arrhh 'M' I so wanted to enjoy the first course. Dave |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"But it was fine, I enjoyed the day with thoughts of then and yester play." feelin this |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just words just pieces of heart shattering in an alphabet of what was i feel this too |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad you enjoyed your day that's what living is about |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
To end my nights alone in thought, wondering still what words have wrought. I love the closing of your poem! Tommy |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
They may be just words, but they are put together very sweetly. Enjoyed this. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dave, I appreciate the time you take to respond to my words, thank you. SEA, I am going through some more changes in life...this time for the better although I won't be working during the next few months and will be studying instead. So I am a bit off now, meaning I am trying to adjust once again Michele, I am getting better at not comparing my past to the present or even the future...although there are some lapses. Thank you hugs M passing shadows ...you know I know you know Tommy, sometimes I don't even remember what I wrote or where it came from...but I am always glad to know someone enjoyed the words. Thank you. Jo, thank you ... even if the words seem lonely they are just momentary feelings~~ hugs M |
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