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September come November
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September come November |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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September come November thus, self forbidding mizzle to befriend me in those years paled hoary there appears an unoccupied interim of time where coming aware splinters of having lost my way recall of déjà vu eviscerates, something potent gnaws, walls between then and now sheer only to opaque, senility will most likely clarify what motions were made, for snapped memories color decades, but eye’s grit decrees absence two fingering dimensional images does not make them warm for a second time I would be a girl again, if doing so meant mother’s lap should hold shed sentiments or father’s shirt would gather denimed memories and clouded outbursts perhaps once this decade is fulfilled, I shall see Octobers again warming to those days between September come November when pain will ease perhaps once this decade is fulfilled, perhaps, once perhaps |
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JosephF Junior Member
since 2006-08-30
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This made me think of when i was a small boy, during the autumn months, where 2 foot deeps leaf piles would become a playground for everyone, all the sunset colors of the leafs, the slow sunsets of orange and red. The Happiest days of my life. Pure Inspiration. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
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perhaps....and it shall, a very moving and delicate rhyme this morning Lady Jane. Very much enjoy your ability to spark such deep emotional thoughts... you need a hug  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh sissie....I was thinking of today, the first of my birth month, and feeling a nostalgic pull..you have written that feeling so beautifully!  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"I would be a girl again, if doing so meant mother’s lap should hold shed sentiments or father’s shirt would gather denimed memories and clouded outbursts" turns a heart Karilea so poignant... |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Thank you, Lady. Tomorrow will be 18 years since Dad left, and in November, Mom will have been gone 14 years. But I don't forget the little things, which made the hard things easier. And the bigger memories keep me going, each day. |
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