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Open Poetry #38

tall grass with roses

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-01 07:34 AM

did my muddy boot noise
make your mind water crazy

the slow suction of skys
into oceans they say
does the soul to undone

just a drop at a time
but it hurrys down

like falling in laughter
and loving after

when the edge of crazy ways
is so close you can fall
but you jump instead

to get the move on done
for the other side of happy

is the tall grass with roses

______________

daark

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2006-09-01 07:45 AM

Smiling...

she probably said "yes".

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-09-01 08:52 AM

Nice moves ya got goin on this mornin D.

Muddie boot sounds, yepp all sloppy and sloshy.....

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2006-09-01 09:01 AM

"the slow suction of skys
into oceans they say
does the soul to undone

just a drop at a time
but it hurrys down

like falling in laughter
and loving after"

I can't even tell you how much I LOVE this

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2006-09-01 09:40 AM

DS

I just love the happy in this...where on earth did you get it??

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2006-09-01 10:41 AM

I absolutely adore this. If you have no objection, it becomes my wallpaper on my machine. Replacing Kipling's "If" no less.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

6 posted 2006-09-01 06:01 PM

I'm sure she said yes
what lady wouldn't want
to fall in laughter?

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