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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2006-09-01 07:34 AM



did my muddy boot noise
make your mind water crazy

the slow suction of skys
into oceans they say
does the soul to undone

just a drop at a time
but it hurrys down

like falling in laughter
and loving after

when the edge of crazy ways
is so close you can fall
but you jump instead

to get the move on done
for the other side of happy

is the tall grass with roses


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daark

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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2006-09-01 07:45 AM



Smiling...

she probably said "yes".




Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-09-01 08:52 AM


Nice moves ya got goin on this mornin D.   Muddie boot sounds, yepp all sloppy and sloshy.....
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with you
3 posted 2006-09-01 09:01 AM


"the slow suction of skys
into oceans they say
does the soul to undone

just a drop at a time
but it hurrys down

like falling in laughter
and loving after"

I can't even tell you how much I LOVE this

Martie
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4 posted 2006-09-01 09:40 AM


DS

I just love the happy in this...where on earth did you get it??  

seraphin
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since 2000-09-24
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5 posted 2006-09-01 10:41 AM


I absolutely adore this. If you have no objection, it becomes my wallpaper on my machine. Replacing Kipling's "If" no less.
The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
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6 posted 2006-09-01 06:01 PM




I'm sure she said yes
what lady wouldn't want
to fall in laughter?


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