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Open Poetry #38

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FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

0 posted 2006-09-01 04:10 AM

It's once a happy family.
Union of parents and sons.
The father tried on adultery.
For some excitement and fun.

Mum was broken as the wedding oath.
She's going to leave this drone.
Bringing along her toddler sons.
Wiped all memories gone.

She'd taken all the clothes she had
Against the biting cold.
And in a note to him she wrote.
I've taken all your gold.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-09-01 11:21 AM

FNG~
If poppa's gonna mine someone else's shaft ... he SHOULD get the shaft !!

I ADORE this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

2 posted 2006-09-01 06:06 PM

"And in a note to him she wrote.
I've taken all your gold."

and well she should..
nicely done FNG

FNG
Member

since 2006-02-07

Posts 477

3 posted 2006-09-02 02:21 AM

hehe...thanks Marge and Lady for always reading me (good or bad),

That's my mama's story..A thing of the past.

[This message has been edited by FNG (09-02-2006 02:52 AM).]

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