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Open Poetry #38

love and music

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2006-08-31 04:48 PM

love to music has been much compared,
and us - but the instruments.
if I a bow, and you a violin
- why need the instruments exchange?

though familiar we may be,
'tis the song that pleasure brings

and the notes we choose
are infinite

CG

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

1 posted 2006-08-31 04:55 PM

Although I don't generally like inversion, I do like the feel of this one, and I especially like the last two lines.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2006-08-31 04:59 PM

I agree with Nan 'cuz we Texans stick together

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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