Open Poetry #38 |
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Beau Lieu |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand ![]() |
5661 Beau Lieu {Beautiful Place} 30 August 2006 For there was a place in your heart such a “beautiful place” to be This loving place, the place to see If only blindness did not stand upon centre stage For then the truth would be open as to a door more than ajar So wrong, yet so right so wonderful, yet so kind Opposition and frustration that quest by name Where the last was first and there was no lasting shame Beautiful place, beautiful heart where there was heaven and earth apart So who created love, that feeling of amour because in your heart was this beautiful place to adore “But many that are first shall be last; and the last shall be first. So the last shall be first, and the first last: for many be called, but few chosen.” Matthew 19: 30; 20: 16 KJV © 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet) a poet who cares |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely words, feelings, and poetry |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Thank you for your kind comments when I am sorry that I am not an avid poetry reader and do not always have the time to express my feelings of others who like share their writing here in these forums yet in saying that I know all comments and feedback of my own writing influence my continued forms of inspiration and willingness to share my own art forms a poet who cares |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Excellent poem, written with genuine feeling. I greatly enjoyed reading this. Regards, Bill |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your heart is a "Beau Lieu" and you express it so poetically. ![]() Loving Light, EA |
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poettothecars Senior Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 1093New Zealand |
Beaulieu happens to be the last name of a woman in Canada, that several of my other poems posted in this thread relate too Thank you for your kindness to my words a poet who cares |
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