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openthoughts
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0 posted 2006-08-30 03:17 AM


Treasure

True happiness was never as unattainable
as it was when I reached for it
Each time, I streched my hand further
to penetrate some distant dream
but not 'till my hand was lowered
did I find my heart was full

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-08-30 11:24 AM


I love the idea of this

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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2 posted 2006-08-30 12:26 PM


::smiles::  A beautiful treasure for my library.   Thank you   :: bows ::
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3 posted 2006-08-30 03:34 PM


OT~
A very effective piece~
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~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2006-08-30 09:53 PM


cool thoughts : )
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5 posted 2006-08-30 10:53 PM




"but not 'till my hand was lowered
did I find my heart was full"

beautifully done openthoughts...

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