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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-08-28 02:37 PM



Between there,
and here,
yes
you are doing
that thing again,

yes, that one
that only you can do

and I do love
the way
it makes my knees go weak

when you accept me
not just the good and bad

but the all of me;

and No
I can not help
but grin
everytime
that I hear
your heartsmiles.....

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Magnus
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1 posted 2006-08-28 04:38 PM


Beautiful passionate and softly sensual.
It would make any man's heart smile.

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-08-28 04:42 PM


This piece made my heart smile

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

The Lady
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3 posted 2006-08-28 10:13 PM





made my heart smile too
Gentle Spirit

XOx Uriah xOX
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4 posted 2006-08-29 05:50 AM


::smiles::    count me in  
Beautiful !

Honeybunch
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5 posted 2006-08-29 06:01 AM


Gentle Spirit - this is lovely.  If we all had "heartsmiles" the world would be a wonderful place.
HopeS
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6 posted 2006-08-29 08:20 AM


Beautifully expressed , yes it feels wonderful how special ones share giving us smiles to wear

Hope

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with you
7 posted 2006-08-29 08:30 AM


seems you are passing those smiles along
Gentle Spirit
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8 posted 2006-08-29 08:48 AM


Ya'll are so sweet, reading these replies makes me smile.  
LeeJ
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9 posted 2006-08-29 01:50 PM


this was lovely
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2006-08-30 06:07 AM


Thanks so much LeeJ!  Hugs!
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