Open Poetry #38 |
Introduction |
Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
In my unformed younger days my speech was rough: urban, Dublin, demotic-- my thoughts chaotic, life was tough. I wanted more of life's delights: music, culture, art. A raw and callow youth, ignorant and uncouth, I knew not where to start. But as I grew, my thoughts cohered, took wing and flew to realms uncharted-- my soul departed into pastures new. The wondrous world of words opened up before me: I was entranced, my mind enhanced by the power of poetry. I'm still a Dublin boy at heart, my soul unchained: but now I hear, sweet and clear, poetry calling, unrestrained. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Welcome Bill. You join a good group of poets here and they will welcome you. Interesting poem. martyjo |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
.. and I am listening ... this is a wonderful introduction. Nice to meet you, aziza |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Thank you both, for reading and for your warm welcomes. Regards, Bill |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I love how you describe a transformation. Good work! Welcome to Passions. |
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Lisey Junior Member
since 2006-08-27
Posts 36UK (Wales) |
The Fella In The Empty Chair an empty playground with a swinging swing telephone going with an endless ring a bottle of milk still full yet so old cheese in the fridge covered in mould tv still playing video still running the air so musky the smell vile an old men gone and hes been there awhile no family calling "Dad are you ok!?" terrible to see someone dying this way He's only been gone a few days thats all!?!? sitting in the chair looking so small just think of other people in a situation like his think of that person that noone would miss then one day the old fella will know that you'll come knocking when its time for him to go! written by lisey |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bill~ Welcome aboard the blue PiP pages~ 'The wondrous world of words opened up before me: I was entranced, my mind enhanced by the power of poetry' Yep ! That's the way it happens~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
Yeay, Bill! Good to see you here, with a beautiful introduction. Simple and rich. |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
What a wonderful first post! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!!! |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Thank you all for welcoming me--much appreciated. Hiya, Kif! Nice to see a familiar name--it was you mentioning this site that made me decide to join. Cheers, Bill |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Nothing common qbout this write! Welcome to the blue pages. I look forward to more Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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kif kif Member
since 2006-06-01
Posts 439BCN |
Cool! I'm glad you're here! It seems huge at first, but you're amongst some good people who'll make sure you'll be comfortable. Plus, your writing is beautiful, a fantastic addition to this place. See you around, Bill. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...writers can do lots with words....James |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi, new writer, I am an old, and lost writer. Enjoyed your thoughts and way of saying them.. Sandra |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but now I hear, sweet and clear, poetry calling, unrestrained." you sure do Bill and you write it well too welcome... |
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Dublin Boy Member
since 2006-08-26
Posts 102UK |
Thank you all for the kind and encouraging comments--I'm delighted by your responses. Regards, Bill |
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