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Dublin Boy
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0 posted 2006-08-27 03:02 AM


In my unformed younger days
my speech was rough:
urban, Dublin, demotic--
my thoughts chaotic,
life was tough.

I wanted more of life's delights:
music, culture, art.
A raw and callow youth,
ignorant and uncouth,
I knew not where to start.

But as I grew, my thoughts
cohered, took wing and flew
to realms uncharted--
my soul departed
into pastures new.

The wondrous world of words
opened up before me:
I was entranced,
my mind enhanced
by the power of poetry.

I'm still a Dublin boy
at heart, my soul unchained:
but now I hear,
sweet and clear,
poetry calling, unrestrained.



© Copyright 2006 Bill Fitzsimons - All Rights Reserved
latearrival
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1 posted 2006-08-27 03:40 AM


Welcome Bill. You join a good group of poets here and they will welcome you. Interesting poem. martyjo
aziza
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2 posted 2006-08-27 04:05 AM


.. and I am listening ... this is a wonderful introduction.  Nice to meet you,

aziza

Dublin Boy
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3 posted 2006-08-27 04:28 AM


Thank you both, for reading  and for your warm welcomes.
Regards,
Bill

Munda
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4 posted 2006-08-27 05:23 AM


I love how you describe a transformation. Good work! Welcome to Passions.
Lisey
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5 posted 2006-08-27 06:00 AM


The Fella In The Empty Chair


an empty playground
with a swinging swing
telephone going with an endless ring

a bottle of milk
still full yet so old

cheese in the fridge
covered in mould

tv still playing
video still running

the air so musky
the smell vile

an old men gone
and hes been there awhile

no family calling
"Dad are you ok!?"
terrible to see someone
dying this way

He's only been gone
a few days
thats all!?!?

sitting in the chair
looking so small

just think of other people
in a situation like his
think of that person
that noone would miss

then one day the old fella
will know
that you'll come knocking
when its time for him to go!


written by lisey

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6 posted 2006-08-27 08:31 AM


Bill~
Welcome aboard the blue PiP pages~

'The wondrous world of words
opened up before me:
I was entranced,
my mind enhanced
by the power of poetry'


Yep !  That's the way it happens~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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kif kif
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7 posted 2006-08-27 08:54 AM


Yeay, Bill! Good to see you here, with a beautiful introduction. Simple and rich.
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8 posted 2006-08-27 12:08 PM


What a wonderful first post! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!!!
Dublin Boy
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9 posted 2006-08-27 02:13 PM


Thank you all for welcoming me--much appreciated.
Hiya, Kif! Nice to see a familiar name--it was you mentioning this site that made me decide to join.
Cheers,
Bill

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10 posted 2006-08-28 10:41 AM


Nothing common qbout this write!
Welcome to the blue pages.
I look forward to more

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

kif kif
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11 posted 2006-08-28 04:49 PM


Cool! I'm glad you're here! It seems huge at first, but you're amongst some good people who'll make sure you'll be comfortable. Plus, your writing is beautiful, a fantastic addition to this place. See you around, Bill.
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2006-08-30 04:51 AM


Nice writing...writers can do lots with words....James
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13 posted 2006-08-31 07:46 PM


Hi, new writer, I am an old, and lost writer. Enjoyed your thoughts and way of saying them..
Sandra

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14 posted 2006-09-01 12:55 PM




"but now I hear,
sweet and clear,
poetry calling, unrestrained."

you sure do Bill
and you write it well too
welcome...

Dublin Boy
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15 posted 2006-09-01 11:03 AM


Thank you all for the kind and encouraging comments--I'm delighted by your responses.
Regards,
Bill

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