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Open Poetry #38

Eyes

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

0 posted 2006-08-27 01:51 AM

Standing
Looking at
Her
Eyes to eyes
Across the room
Words of love
In my eyes
Three mounths
It takes to
Ask her name
Dreams of love i had
No words
To say
Stumbling over
Myself
Asking
Joy
When she said yes
Days gone by
With love
Hopeing
That she looks
Again at me
With love in her eyes
Dieing without her
Slowly starving
Away without her
Looking at her
As she turns
Away
Missing
Words to say
Come back.

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

1 posted 2006-08-28 10:21 AM

Well done.
You present your feelins very well!
It would help if you used a spell checker

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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