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love poem |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland 
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My life is turning bleak for I know not who to love For the one who I feel a vivid connection knows my love Yet she wishes way my love to nowhere and calls love Sweet by me but not to me, my love is true love, But I am no man to her but friend, so gone is my love I cannot speak for no one can be as sad as me from love I now know how it feels when the heart breaks from love Cast aside as to hurt me more than hell, far from love A thorn inside that’s deeper than the blackest whole from love There is no coming back from telling my love how I love And that I love her with such love as to hurt my heart with no love Yet now I feel emptiness inside my soul for I will not cry for love It will not beat me as so many before, for I know of love I have heard of the great calling and longing and pain of love My tears don’t fall because this love was a lost love One that never came to fruition, so I did not see this love A two sided ideal that I am sad to have come across as love Would it be better to have had her love and lose her love? Or is it best not to feel her love and never know her love, to not lose her love This question I will not know, for I only know one of side this love For no coins faces are both shown at one time, always one will see her love No man can get what another has from a true girl in love So I am as sad as all other poet kings in love I feel now just as they do feel, that I will never find my idyllic love So sure I am not, for uncertain I am of all of love One thing I wish more far above is just to love Oh let me love you, let me love! |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
i've been reading your work, though i have not said....your thoughts and images, are wonderful....I enjoyed this much, as I have all your work....  BTW Welcome to passions....  And so it those we live with |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
knowing the loon's cry enables the reader to hear this even more clearly, more poignantly, than simply reading the words ~it's in the sound I listened, I heard this beautiful soulful write |
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itzy New Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 4USA |
i like your poems. they're very vivid. i can feel what you feel. keep up the good work. ! |
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themute Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 469Maryland |
recognition is always pleasent, especially when your 17, thanks to you all. |
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