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Open Poetry #38

Untouchable

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2006-08-24 07:16 PM

I'm untouchable but I'm forcing you to feel me,
That's just the way it haves to be.
Split personalities flip like clamshell cell phones,
Your principles are based on those of droans.
I'm UNTOUCHABLE but I'm forcing you to feel me!
In plain sight but remain unseen,
Adapt your senses sharp and keen.
Is this the real life is it right?
No it's given out of spite.
But the show must go on,
Till the last breath is gone.
Branded 'Untouchable' sounds so befitting,
Just one thing everyone is forgetting.
I'M UNTOUCHABLE BUT I'M FORCING YOU TO FEEL ME!!

Swinging the Dead in this Free Fall you call life, Swinging the Dead on a Deathride

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

1 posted 2006-08-24 10:36 PM

Pretty cool write boyo

Neotec
Member

since 2006-08-22

Posts 112

2 posted 2006-08-24 11:46 PM

untouchable spirit, flying so high.
down you come with wings aflame,
into to lake of cool water, untouchable spirit your alive.
nice

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

3 posted 2006-08-25 01:18 AM

"I'M UNTOUCHABLE BUT I'M FORCING YOU TO FEEL ME!!"

yes, you are Snowflake
and I feel you...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2006-08-25 10:59 AM

..."I'm forcing you to feel me,"

~ and I felt every impassioned word!

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