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In Eyes Of Speak
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In Eyes Of Speak |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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In sapphire reflections is told a tale; his tale of life shaded in shadows, haunts of past still hold him there yet love of life is so alive when windows to the soul twinkle ever so slightly. I hear the song; his song I feel the calm, in voice so strong; and I savor every word clinging to the light that comes shining through and I; I listen in the silence to this melody of such beauty and tragedy, knowing each second is oh so sweet... Dear gentle of man return soon to me so that I can hear again the rhapsody when your eyes speak in hues of youth, aged with wisdom and learned truths.. Come speak again, softly oh eyes of blue while whispering to me the story of you. If I have touched just one heart through my words, then I have achieved my dream.. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlePoetess~ You touch a beautiful melody within your word-keys~ *sigh* ... breathtaking heart-rendered piece~ The remembered melody of love returns ... long after the spotlight has dimmed~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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lost4dm New Member
since 2006-05-28
Posts 6Louisiana, USA |
Very beautiful poem. I like a lot of the words you use. I too pine in silence for someone and I can relate to this one. Keep at it. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes... the silence is beautifully strange... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Donna, I loved this |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Such reverence, hope and love.... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful dear lady, as you soul....hugssss  sis..... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Donna....Such a plea, so quietly strong, would be hard not to yield to. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
The tranquil waters that these words float upon have depths of such passion..that waves leap higher from the undercurrent...enjoyed this poem...thank you for your words.. Goldenrose. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
such tender longing a chiffon feel to the ache |
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XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
::sighs:: Made me wish my eyes were blue and that this would claim me. Beautifully written! Beautiful |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
~sigh~ can't find the right words but heard the song, embraced the feelings, and sent a hug across the blue |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
this is lovely Donna. much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A joy to read...James |
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