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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I listen to the sound songs of your cap off liquor the cry eye laughter high when your arms are numb fingered when you can't say love words and breathe too so you choose just some parts of unladylike to wear on your lipstick you are my favorite candy then when your glass is broken and you let me cut myself deep on your jagged lovely when you leave the cotton down and say sweaty is pretty skin when it shimmers in the sun languid loved before another squall messes up sooth sinned satiation ________________ daark |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
jagged fragments, broken glass fingers numbing cannot ask call to arms, says it all speaks in shadows on the wall |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl...blame it on the verve thanks lady friend |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL Energy and talent, definately!  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh excellent! I love the music in this one, the pretty glowing sweat skin. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Une telle merveille dans ces vos mots. Musique aux sens. Sandra |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms kl, thanks for being you _________________ ms nan, humble thanks for the review _________________ ms sandra, vous souriez j'avec vos observations |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
sometimes Stranger squalls come without warning furious wet storms moving at high speed lay in a good supply of your favorite candy... I like this one |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when you can't say love words and breathe too so you choose ~*~ That breathless quality of your writing becomes all.  Thank you for this beauty. |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
It captivates. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
lady one, am prepared ms, always stored up for the ride, thanks _____________ ms sun, thanks for the eyes lady friend ______________________ ms az, thanks friend for the touch |
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