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marcel
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0 posted 2006-08-23 10:11 PM


Perspective

Sometimes life burdens the good spirited,
Just as the night itself unravels from the day’s stresses;
Similar is the loneliness of a faithful man,
Whose heart is not ashamed to shed tears for yesterday…

Marcel


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-08-24 12:55 PM


Comfort and understanding flow beneath the darker sky in this poem.  One I will go back to more than once.  Well written.
TD


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2 posted 2006-08-24 08:47 AM


Marcel~
Amen, gentle poet ... Amen~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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3 posted 2006-08-24 09:20 AM


Oh, Marcel...

Giving you a loving, comforting hug,

EA

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4 posted 2006-08-25 06:25 AM


Similar is the loneliness of a faithful man,
Whose heart is not ashamed to shed tears for yesterday…

A treasure.

A nice read, enjoyed.


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-08-25 10:40 AM


This is marvelous!
More!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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6 posted 2006-08-26 02:23 PM


Enjoyed this one very much!!!!
~Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Andre Brink


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