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droppinginsideout
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0 posted 2006-08-23 06:27 AM


in a dissapointing tone, you say "i need to talk to you."
and as im walking down the hall, i realize it is just me and you.
my heart goes heavy and still i find a way,
to come and sit beside you, as you tell me Chase has gone away.
at first only memories are racing through my head,
as i see our childhood , and the lives our thoughts had lead.
as the scooter leaves the ground, i see a friendly face.
and i notice how it glistened, and i see my cousin Chase.
no one can ever take that away, and I see movement along the plain.


i let the pain sink a bit, and i hope it isnt true
how my cousin left this world, its like he just left me and you.
and even though i see him in a better place,
i can still feel the sorrow and see the anguish on his face.
and it hurts even though it was two years ago, i remember walking down the street,
and making targets out of snow.

and for your mom, my aunt, i wrote,
a little writing i wrote to you.
for all  the things i would've said,
had it not been for the distance we'd been through.
twelve hours away and still i cry like me.
taking you to places in my mind, only places you wanted to see.
i can hear your voice every now and then.
and how you're correcting my life as if you held my life in your hands.

i know you're guiding me along the way,
as to see if I knew which way my own life would end
until i see your friendly face
and i finally understand.

(blue ocotober) hate me today...
hate me tomorrow
hate me for all the things i didnt do for you.

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2006 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-08-23 07:41 AM


this left me speechless
it is a time we all unfortunately go through
or will
and yet, we always seem to take those
times for granted, no matter
how much we are reminded
of that fact
love to you and yours

a heartwarming write


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