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Troy
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0 posted 2006-08-23 12:16 PM


Birds that glide in steeped serenity
hear no voices of posterity
but yield to each moment's graced inflection
the inside-out of their own perfection.

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1 posted 2006-08-23 12:30 PM


I would say we could learn a lot from those birds. Nicely written.
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2 posted 2006-08-23 12:49 PM


Thoughtful write

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2006-08-23 03:58 PM


oh, I do like this very much
thanks for sharing

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4 posted 2006-08-25 06:13 AM


"but yield to each moment's graced inflection"

All about meditation in a few words.

Not easy to stay still though...lol

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5 posted 2006-08-25 11:07 AM


Hi, Troy! As a meditator myself, your title drew me in ~ and I am very pleased that it did!

Lovely!

Loving Light,
EA

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6 posted 2006-08-25 11:13 AM


Well chosen words to ponder

    Rae

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7 posted 2006-08-25 11:17 PM




nicely done, Troy

Troy
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8 posted 2006-08-27 12:09 PM


Thanks All!

Gliding is alot like dreaming...enjoyable if the 'birds' don't squawk!

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9 posted 2006-08-27 05:14 AM


What a wonderful poem, leaving images of serenity and perfection.
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