| Open Poetry #38 |
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You And Me |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace
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You And Me you are poetry in the grass as wind swirls across it and I am merely the air between your breath “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...stunning. Eric |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ You are one fresh breath of poetry blowing through the blue~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Magnus![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Wow Helen, that is some of the most power packed words I have seen in a poem... Well done, and good to see ya. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
always, you write jewels Helen... "and I am merely the air between your breath" |
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Interloper![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This belongs at the top ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms helen, you do little things to words that leave big impressions |
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