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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-08-22 07:01 AM



You And Me

you are poetry in the grass
as wind swirls across it
and I am merely the air
between your breath


“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell



© Copyright 2006 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2006-08-22 02:05 PM


Wow...stunning.

Eric

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2 posted 2006-08-22 06:52 PM


OneSlick~
You are one fresh breath of poetry blowing through the blue~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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3 posted 2006-08-22 06:57 PM


Wow Helen,  that is some of the most power
packed words I have seen in a poem...

Well done,  and good to see ya.

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-08-22 11:00 PM



always, you write
jewels Helen...

"and I am merely the air
between your breath"


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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2006-08-23 12:56 PM


This belongs at the top

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-08-23 02:48 PM


ms helen, you do little things to words
that leave big impressions

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