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poettothecars
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0 posted 2006-08-22 05:54 AM


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So Much to Vanity

22 August 2006


Was the end the beginning
that silence embraced to the wind
The shadow a shade, the morrow near
unto those to give, severed as to live

Just days away from departure
if this God who exists, does not step in
As if August was the month of endeavour
a placement of start to end

Surviving death, yet on a diet of stress
one final inhale, gasping for breath
So was this vanity or delight
to know serenity was of her

Sanitation or Salvation
sanity to the insane
The fear of departure
wanting to stay
and so much
in need of love


“Then said I in my heart, As it happeneth to the fool, so it
happeneth even to me; and why was I then more wise?
Then I said in my heart, that this also is vanity. Therefore I
hated life; because the work that is wrought under the sun is
grievous unto me: for all is vanity and vexation of spirit.”
Ecclesiastes 2: 15, 17 KJV


© 2006 Christopher W Herbert (a New Zealand Poet)

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© Copyright 2006 Christopher W Herbert - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2006-08-22 06:23 AM


"Pride goeth before the fall".

This stanza was especially moving to me:
~ "Just days away from departure
if this God who exists, does not step in
As if August was the month of endeavour
a placement of start to end"

God bless this soul ~ and yours.

God's Loving Light,
EA

poettothecars
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2 posted 2006-08-24 07:25 AM


what that stanza means, is due to financial constraint, my days on line could be numbered. Or I could survive the storm

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Earth Angel
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3 posted 2006-08-24 10:03 AM


Oh, is that what you meant! I'm sorry to hear of your financial constraints. I pray that God does step in so that you can continue to share your poetry with the world.


EA

poettothecars
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4 posted 2006-08-25 04:26 AM


Thank you

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