Open Poetry #38 |
An Appetite For Joy |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
An Appetite For Joy The buzz of an August afternoon Flits it’s fancy across new mown fields Sunspots creep across laughing leaves Dabbing freckles on broad green sleeves Prone in clover grass as daylight chases Magnify inspection, changing faces Hours float by, sunny side to painted sky Gardens shed the suppleness of new Memories of better times are few Turned belly down upon the earth A chin rest, hand on hand traverse Noted scurry to prepare a point of view Faint, the summer sunset falls to null Dinnertime and table side the opal glow Creative thoughts make shadow to the page Line dried pleasure in the winds to wage Done, the tasks demanded of this day Gone, the hours slowly ticked away And yet, this energy resounds its weight Growling at a rising moon’s articulate A hunger for the dreams left waiting Disquieted, the night debating, stay For the taste of every moment saved When still the sweet of love is craved Copyright Kkh 8/22/06 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“Hours float by, sunny side to painted sky Gardens shed the suppleness of new Memories of better times are few Turned belly down upon the earth A chin rest, hand on hand traverse Noted scurry to prepare a point of view” Norman Rockwell couldn’t have painted a more picturesque view. Great write Kathy! JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a beautifully articulated peace. Thank you for sharing |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A hunger for the dreams left waiting ~*~ There are times when I leave dreams, knowing they will return... and I'm this anxious... knowing I need them as much as they need me. Well done, Kathleen. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect. Eric |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
The last two lines topped this off perfectly. Lovely write! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
If you could read my wish to you, you would smile. Thanx for the beauty of this. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
what you can do with words is incredible TD... “Dinnertime and table side the opal glow” |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
GR8! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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FNG Member
since 2006-02-07
Posts 477 |
Very visual description. I wished i could turn my belly onto the earth... |
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