Open Poetry #38 |
Obscurity |
Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
Stars Lost in obscurity Vanishing Lost in the darkness unknow Gone forever In the darkness Disappearing Vanishing without a trace Clouds of gas and matter left to the whims Of space. Moving Glowing in a circle without no end Downward spiraling Always going in Vanishing like the stars Never to be seen Forever gone Seemingly endless Without a beginning Without an end Never to be seen by the eye Stars in the sea Surrounding the void Shinng within the sea of darkness Like lost leaves shining throught the Morning dew Gone Like islands in the sea of darkness Waves breaking on the shore Tearing them down from molecules and atoms That their made of Forever rendering Forever tearing them down Where no lights shine Stars goeth To somewhere else Without the shining Of their birthright Of their happiness to glow their freedom to glow red mad Or yellow of mellow Or the blue of the bluest saphire Sad Or the brownest of dirt Or the white of clouds None of the shining In the darkness Until reaching the end Where this darkness becomes brighter Then brighter Brighness brighter Shining throught the darkness Bursting forth Like the brith of a baby. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow, you paint a very vivid picture with your words Welcome to Pip! ‘I want to swim away |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Welcome to PIP and what an entrance enjoyed floating along your words |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Welcome to the blue pages Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
NeoTec~ Welcome and thank you for the star shower flow of your thoughts~ 'Stars goeth To somewhere else Without the shining Of their birthright' I LIKE this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Neotec Member
since 2006-08-22
Posts 112 |
You'r all welcome. hoping i touch people out there with my words. |
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